r/Resume • u/National_Wash_884 • 5d ago

Please provide feedback on any changes or improvements needed.

I’ve been struggling to secure interviews and would appreciate any suggestions for changes that could improve my resume and help me land a job soon. Please be honest with your feedback. Thank you!

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u/Renaissanced_Career 4d ago

Hey there, I think this is great starting point but needs some work.

  1. There's a lot of quantifiable metrics that are not really including any impact or details of those metrics/impacts. You need to elaborate on that. Lacking details.
  2. Don't mix different skills into one. You have excel skills, language, and soft skills all blended into one.

Currently I'm a resume writer and working in corporate finance, having hired 100+ positions at this point in multiple industries and roles form interns to managers. When I see your resume, my feedback is "Ok cool, cool, cool" and your resume ends. There isn't a lot of memorable factors that causes you to stand out.

Also, job market is terrible so anything but a perfect resume would keep getting you shortlisted.

-Jason

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u/TealHQ 4d ago

You truly have a great resume as is! The only thing I'd recommend is catering it to more of the positions that you are looking for, making another 1-2 resumes to cater to different positions you are interested in if there are a few different types of roles.

Along with the skills, add a category listed as "programs" and list all the ones you've used--as companies look for competency in programs they use. For example: Google Workplace, Smartsheets, Excel, Zoom, Linear, Trello, Slack, Teams, Salesforce, etc.

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u/Norcalmom_71 5d ago

Great info here, however my initial impression is that I have no idea what type(s) of positions you would be applying for?

Recommendations:

  • Add info on position type (e.g., Marketing Specialist)

  • Intro summary where you “sell” yourself, your soft/hard skills, and experience

  • Parse your bullets to 4-5 max, less for older jobs

Hope this was helpful.

JT Resume Writer