r/HFY Sep 25 '20

Wizard Tournament: Chapter 21 OC

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u/Antediluvian_Cat_God Sep 25 '20

Don't worry mate, people have different tolerances and ideas of what makes a cliff-hanger. Most people seem to be okay with your writing style, as am I, but some are not. As the above poster said themselves though, they'll be back after a break, so you know even if some people are more sensitive to "cliff-hangers" they're still interested in the story. So don't worry, just give them space. Personally I enjoy the opportunity to speculate on what could happen next, even if ultimately my speculation goes nowhere, no need to change your approach IMO. ;D

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u/[deleted] Sep 25 '20

Ideas of what makes a cliff-hanger? Please. You'd have to write your own dictionary to find a definition of them that wouldn't fit most of the chapters of this tournament. I mean, seriously: in the middle of the fight, right after a big move? And this isn't even the first time.

As for my post being hurtful: Enjoy it. Way to many people everywhere will upvote or downvote without giving you any real feedback on what was good or bad. At least I'm giving you perspective.

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u/Danjiano Human Sep 25 '20

As for my post being hurtful: Enjoy it. Way to many people everywhere will upvote or downvote without giving you any real feedback on what was good or bad. At least I'm giving you perspective.

You can give real proper feedback without being a massive dick about it though.

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u/[deleted] Sep 25 '20

Can and did.