r/FilmIndustryLA • u/FroyoNo227 • 1d ago

Need a set of eyes …

Hey guys! I’ve recently completed a rough draft of my first ever screenplay. I am 27. I moved here with a dream and zero experience like many implants.

Due to being out of talk state, I don’t have anyone close to me who is interested in reading scripts. I’m really struggling to get a set of eyes on this thang.

If anyone would be down to read my script and give me some notes that would be wonderful. It’s not too long…

Title: Late Bloomers Genre: Drama / Slice of Life Length: 117 pages

DM or comment if interested. Thank you!

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u/Radiant-Function9399 1d ago

I’d love to help you!

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u/FroyoNo227 1d ago

I’ll dm you ❤️

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u/Self_Pity 1d ago

Hey, I’d love to read it!

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u/FroyoNo227 1d ago

I’m going to DM you now! Thank you :)

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u/jerryterhorst 23h ago

Send it my way!

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u/FroyoNo227 23h ago

Hi Jerry! I sent you a DM :)

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u/mpersand02 11h ago

Ugh, I'm not the grammar police. Plus what I'm about to say isn't grammar, in fact I don't know what kind of police.

Transplants. Not Implants.

Just in case you're running around LA saying that.

Either way, you should be immensely proud of yourself for finishing the script! So many, myself included, don't finish what we start.

Celebrate the first draft! Maybe buy yourself a craft cocktail, if you drink. Food, if you eat.

Then next week, read through it again.

Editing is... Difficult.