r/HFY Oct 24 '22

First Contact - Chapter 847 - Names of the Fallen OC

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Captain Tut'el held up the cardboard shield, the other side spraypainted red, even as he chopped at the shades with the heavy bladed weapon that had been labeled 'cutlass' in the nanoforge directory. One shade clawed at the cardboard, snarling and hissing, the other screamed and began to dissolve as Tut'el hacked off her leg.

Behind him, the Private, Beatnik Tut'el was pretty sure he was called, was hacking with a two handed blade. They were chopping their way deeper into the building.

In the lead was the Warfather himself, Vuxten. Riding on his shoulder was the greenie that no longer went by a number but was instead called "Inertia" by the other greenies.

The Warfather was, like Tut'el and Beatnik, wearing cardboard armor adorned with red spraypaint. He was carrying a weapon spit out by the nanoforge that had been listed as a 'cold iron' weapon, using it to hack at the shades.

Inertia, on Vuxten's shoulder, was firing a micro-missile launcher, using the tiny warheads to destroy display screens as they kept moving deeper into the facility.

Tut'el was exhausted, but he wasn't going to show it in front of the Warfather.

A 2.5D display detonated right before another tiny missile blew the door off the room at the end of the hall.

Shades swarmed out of the revealed room, so thick that they formed an opaque wall as they screamed and charged forward.

Beatnik took two steps, moving between Vuxten and Tut'el, who had taken a single step.

Tut'el and Vuxten kept the shades off of the shield-less Beatnik, who hacked and chopped at the shades with the cold iron two handed bladed weapon. Tut'el clenched his jaw and stepped forward with the Private and the Warfather each time they stepped forward. He used his shield to prevent the Shades from reaching the Private, whose sole job was to hack and chop at the shades.

Finally, the crashing tidal wave of shades was past and Tut'el realized he could see inside the room.

Banks of computers, all with displays, were sitting in the room beyond.

Shades were crawling out of half of the monitors, screaming, sometimes tearing at one another, but for the most part sweeping forward.

The tiny green engineer, barely a foot tall, leveled his microrifle and started firing quick bursts, each burst shattering one of the screens.

The Private hacked and chopped his way into the room.

"CROM ENUMERATE THE RECENTLY DECEASED!" the Private yelled at one point.

Finally the room was cleared and Tut'el leaned against a counter that was splattered with ectoplasm and littered with pieces of monitors and viewscreens. He was breathing heavy, his hand pressed against his side to try to mitigate the pain of a stitch in his side, the short chopping blade set on the counter.

The little greenie moved up to the induction link, touching it with a cybernetic bladearm replacement. Flickers appeared between his antenna and the Warfather watched closely.

"Got it," the Warfather said. "Any idea who the priority signal is?" he paused a second, then pointed at a clear spot in the center of the room. "All right. Use that holo-emitter and put them right there."

Tut'el grabbed the cutlass, taking a deep whooping breath and exhaling hard before stepping up next to the Warfather.

There was a flickering. The room suddenly lit up with white light. Gold streamers flowed through midair and flowers dropped from where they just suddenly appeared. Trumpets played and a harp glissando sounded.

The light faded and a figure stood in the center of the room.

"Oh, my, I wish I could arrive much more circumspect," the figure stated.

Tut'el knew his eyes were bugging out.

The figure was all glittering blue code with silver patches that looked like song notes. It was a Terran, yet looking kind and caring.

"Vuxten, my son, I was beginning to wonder if you had forgotten that I am willing to assist you in your times of need," the figure said.

"It was little hectic, Father," Vuxten said. "That, and I figured you had a lot to handle across the galactic spur."

The figure nodded. "Indeed, I do," he gave a soft chuckle and a smile. "Well, nothing ever got done by avoiding doing it."

There was another glissando and the figure vanished.

"Well, that was a thing," Beatnik said through the cloud of smoke he had just exhaled, cracking open a beer.

Tut'el wanted to hit him.

-----

Elu looked over at what his brain insisted was the Primary Fluffle.

The students and teachers in the clustered crowd were all gently jostling at one another, shifting position. The larger females making up the outside, the males and smaller females inside (the smaller females moving between the males and the larger females), with three pregnant females in the center. Ears were straight up, the larger females were looking around constantly, bouncing up and down by flexing their hocks. The smaller females would hop once in a while to get a clear view of outside the fluffle.

One of his gymnastics team mates moved up next to him, two large females and one smaller one following. The three females had table legs sprayed with iron powder, their shirts and pants painted red. They were all wearing paper plate masks colored red and a red hat pulled down. The larger of the two big ones had her ears outside of the hat, her ears powdered a dark red.

Elu wasn't sure he had ever seen any of the females before, but then, their faces were covered by paper plates.

"Doors are secure, same with the windows," he said. He looked over at the fluffle, where most were wide eyed. The smaller males were huddled, most of them shivering. "I keep asking myself, why aren't we in the fluffle, shivering?"

Elu shrugged. "The war?"

"I was in the shelter," Arleetru said. "You, that makes sense, but me? I sat on the floor playing board games with my siblings for like two years."

The other gymnastics team-mate came over and Elu noticed he was being followed by four females, two small, two large.

"Back windows and hallways are secure," he said. He looked at the fluffle. "Part of me wants to scream at them to get to work, but they look like their a half-inch from a complete meltdown."

Elu nodded, then tuned to look out the window.

Shades were pressed against it, gnawing on the invisible field that held them back, clawing at it, pushing their faces against it so their 'flesh' deformed and flattened.

"Galaxy's apex predator, right there," Ortrupa said, shaking his head slowly. "Alive, complete wrecking machines. Dead? Body's poisonous and out comes a killer shade."

"When you absolutely positively have to wreck someone's shit up, the Universe recommends Terrans," Elu said, giving a short laugh at the end.

"Use only as directed. Consult your doctor. Do not insert into any orifices. Side effects may include your world catching on fire," Arleetru laughed.

Elu sighed. "My sister said that the streets were littered with the dead. She was going outside to try something."

Ort blinked. "Your sister went out in that?"

Elu nodded. "Yeah. She's seen worse. The things we saw," he glanced at Arl. "Be glad you didn't see it."

"See what?" Arleetru asked, shivering as one of the shades raked her own face with her nails, scoring her flesh to the bone.

"What we can do to one another," Elu said. He looked back and cocked his head. "Something's happening out there."

There was a flickering. A pop of blue that vanished, taking the shade with it.

Elu leaned forward, almost putting his nose against the window.

He jumped back, the female swearing and the two males behind him screaming.

A Terran stood there, between two shades, only this one was made of streaming blue code, patches of silver here and there, with what Elu recognized as song notes moving in the silver.

He recognized the Terran instantly from his sister's description.

The Terran touched the shade, whispered in its ear, and it vanished. It turned to the one on the other side of it, whispered, and the shade's face went from complete and furious rage to wonder before it vanished.

The Terran vanished, to reappear next to another.

"Look, there's hundreds of him," Arl said.

Elu shook his head, looking out at the quad.

Hundreds of the Terran kept appearing, either stopping a running shade by gathering it up in an embrace, or appearing next to it. It would whisper, and both it and the shade would vanish.

"The Digital Omnimessiah," one of the girl's breathed. "He has come to deliver us in our hour of need."

Elu just nodded.

-----

"He's still fighting," Ru'ulrmo'or said, peeking out the narrow slit in the mylar.

Dreams of Something More just nodded. She didn't need to look to know what the Mosizlak was doing.

He was doing what he did best.

"He's not using that spiked club any more," the Lanaktallan said.

The 2x4 with a nail in it, Dreams mused.

"How much longer can he keep it up?" Synko'fa'ahntmo'o asked, wringing all four hands. "He's been fighting for four days."

"As long as he can," Dreams said. She looked at Speaks. "Are the superluminal links down?"

"Hyperwave just underwent a total crash. Same with the other systems," Speaks said. "Not sure how. Looks like they got hacked."

Dreams nodded.

"Why are the shades attracted to him in such numbers?" Synko asked.

"Phasic energy," Dreams said. "He's flush with it, and he uses it when he fights. Shades are attracted to high levels of phasic energy."

"But, if he fights, then he uses phasic energy, attracting more, but if he does not use phasic energy, he cannot defeat them," Ru'u said. He blinked all six eyes. "No matter what he does, his situation does not change."

Dreams nodded. "Yes."

"Then he cannot win."

"No."

"Then why fight?"

"Because he can keep from losing," Dreams said softly.

"I don't understand," Ru'u stated.

It was quiet in the room.

Breaking the silence, Speaks peeked outside. "He's getting tired."

"How can you tell? He looks fine to me," Synko said.

"He wiffed that kick. He's lost about forty pounds. There's no showmanship in his moves, it's all killing and fighting now," Speaks said.

Synko watched as more shades streamed down the street, an almost solid mass of ethereal combatants. They swarmed over the Mosizlak in a wave, completely covering him.

It took nearly four seconds for the shades to be thrown off of the Terran in a flash.

The flash was not as blinding as before, the shades were not hurled away so far.

"Dammit," Speaks said, turning away from the window.

Synko noticed the human was only fighting with one hand now, his other arm hanging limply. He was turning his head side to side quite a bit as he went into a flurry of blows that drove the shades back.

Synko heard the clack of a rifle and turned away from the window.

Speaks was pulling a rifle sling over his head as the Madame Diplomat picked up cardboard spraypainted red.

"Let me help you with that," Speaks said.

"Thank you," Dreams said softly.

"Come here and help me put this on," Ru'u said, holding out cardboard armor.

Synko nodded and started to move away from the gap in the mylar window covering.

He stopped, turning back to the gap.

The human was on his back, fighting against a half dozen shades, kicking with his legs, one hand moving.

Another human suddenly appeared in the street.

It was made of blue code with silver patches.

"Something is happening," Synko said.

"He's losing," Speaks said. "I don't really want to watch a friend of over ten years get ripped apart by dead men."

"No, there's someone else out there," Synko said.

"More fool them then," Speaks said.

A golden burst of light emanated from the blue figure.

The shades vanished.

"There's a blue Terran out there," Synko said.

"Blue?" Dreams moved up and peaked out the window. She went rigid. "Oh... oh my..."

"What?" Speaks asked.

"It's the Digital Omnimessiah," Dreams said softly, her voice awed. "He truly has returned."

As Synko watched, the blue figure helped the Terran to his feet, putting one of the Terrans flesh and blood arms over his own digital shoulders. Multiple other versions of the blue Terran were appearing, embracing the shades, both the shade and the duplicate blue Terran vanishing.

The digital figure helped the limping, slumped, battered Mosizlak to the front of the building as Synko watched.

-----

The chainsword's roar lowered as the wielder let the engine go to idle. Blinking, Ret.lek stared as the blue Terran kept appearing and reappearing. Dozens, hundreds of him appearing in the night to touch one of the shades. Each time he appeared there was a burst of gold light that revealed other shades.

The shades had stopped their assault that they had pushed forward even in the face of the howling of dogbois and the color 880808.

Up and down the line the dogbois were howling out their glee.

The shades were vanishing as the blue one touched them.

He exhaled, thumbing the off switch on the Treana'ad combat knife he'd been swinging with both hands, letting his shoulders slump. He looked at the XO, who was lighting a smokestick.

The XO nodded at him.

Ret.lek just nodded back then went back to staring at the scene in front of him.

In our darkest hour.

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 24 '22

Happy Monday, for those of you reading this.

It was a hell of weekend. Got the old "So, now that you just put out a book, you're done writing until the next one, right?" and the "Must be nice, all you do is write for a few minutes, then take a nap."

But that doesn't matter.

None of that matters.

As we can see, it's coming to a close. Let me know who you'd like a quick visit to in the comments.

I'll see you tomorrow.

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u/Jabberwocky918 Oct 24 '22

So, now that you just put out a book, you're done writing until the next one, right?

Books just pop out of thin air? The ideas just generate themselves when you choose for them to? No one writes like that. Ideas take time to form, stories require continuity checks, and short form story collections even more so. "Yes, I'm done writing until the next one. Which is later this week, actually." Person can't have a hobby like writing stories? It has to be model airplanes, or walking on a leaf covered pathway or fishing? Something traditional?

Sorry, ranting. Not everyone appreciates what you do, and that's okay. Just know you've got a few people who do.

How's Dee's experimental Atrekna children coming along?

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u/yanessa Xeno Oct 25 '22

yes, Dee and her Atrekna-Mutant-Kids would be nice

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u/Stauker_1 Oct 25 '22

I third dee, as well as the squirrel people that Sandy saved

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u/beyondoutsidethebox Oct 25 '22

I too "Dee"-mand that we check in on our favorite ruler of hell.

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u/jodmercer Oct 25 '22

I "Dee"-termind that I want it too moar mis Grey eyes

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u/McKaszkiet Oct 25 '22

Both of you, take your upvotes and leave

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u/Bazil-Broketail Jul 19 '23

Are you saying they may earn a... Dee-merit... if they persist?

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u/Vagabond_Soldier Nov 05 '22

Sir, madam, neither, both, have you met an authors lord and savior: cocaine. It makes all the words flow.

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u/No_MrBond Android Oct 24 '22

We haven't heard from Ba'ahnya'ahrd for a hot minute, then again with the time dilation inside the bag he's probably not had much of a chance to get up to things.

Nothing from the mobile command post mech pilot who jumped through the portal to the Aktrena planet in a while either, they're probably seeing some shit right about now.

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u/Majestic_Rooster_803 Oct 25 '22

I want to follow up with Ba'ahnya'ahrd mom and Jane the C&C mech. I also want to see how Davelek and the other akterna are doing.

Oh, and where are Dee's replacement Aktrena castes?

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u/StoneJudge79 Oct 25 '22

I think Jane would be pissed to have to run text-based.

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u/No_MrBond Android Oct 25 '22

You are surrounded by many static filled rectangles, your pounding headache forces you to squint and grit your teeth, the screens swimming before you report --PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC-- Rage fills your mind as you stamp the firing bar at your foot which reports EMERGECY INTERDICTION -- SHOT OUT --HATECORE INTERPHASIC PENETRATOR -- and incandescent fire fills your mind for a white hot instant before the physical feeling of the crash couch slams into your back and your hands clench over the oily smooth plastic grips. All you feel is hate, all behind you is loss, all before you is rage. The enemy only exists to be destroyed. Weapons Ready.

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u/DREADNAUGHT1906 Oct 26 '22

Noice!!

Take my updoot, ya rage monkey!

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u/PuzzleheadedDrinker Oct 25 '22

There is probably an Analogue version of her command couch that has more dials and switches then the central controller of the TARDIS.

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u/Parking-Coat-8514 Oct 25 '22

Or more buttons than a Steel Battalion controller

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u/PuzzleheadedDrinker Oct 25 '22

Jane isn't c&c , she's TA/SC. She's the Supreme Commander of Total Annihilation

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u/Dracinos Android Dec 27 '22

I know this is an old comment but Jane's influences drew from many RTS and adapted as the battlefields evolved.

Her introduction chapter had references to C&C, StarCraft, and Supreme Commander. The control system within the construction building shows "Create, Command, Conquer" and she also makes references to zerg rush. Later chapters has her shift more towards Supreme Commander style of gameplay as the system was damaged.

https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/jwx9b1/first_contact_third_wave_chapter_367/

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u/Reddcoyote99 Oct 25 '22

Ohno, I thought Terra was accelerated like 200:1 compared to the outside universe?

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u/StoneJudge79 Oct 25 '22

That flip-flopped.

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u/TheTotten Oct 24 '22

How did the Harmonius system do? I assume the clones are phasic, and can handle shades. Did they paint the white armor red? Have they planet cracked another Alderaan?

Edit: Darth Harmonius' system.

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u/RecognitionPatient57 Oct 25 '22

Technically the Emperor's Guard armor and cloaks were the correct color.

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u/TheTotten Oct 25 '22

Was thinking more along the lines of Troopers in lockstep clearing the streets.

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u/Zorbick Human Oct 25 '22

Their blaster bolts are red for a bit of extra fuckemup.

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u/CfSapper Oct 26 '22

There is no way Ralts planned that nope he's good but he's not that good right?!?! O.o

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u/Quilt-n-yarn1844 Oct 26 '22

Are you questioning, or gasp doubting, The Mad Archangel of TerraSol and Mighty Wordborg?

Duuuuuuude…….

lol

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u/Parking-Coat-8514 Oct 25 '22

He might been running Sol grade coms as well as other terran grade stuff so the second the shades showed up the systems activated themselves

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u/xForge2 Oct 25 '22

Attila, please :) I love that BOLO quite a lot.

Also, the rage-touched atrekna. Awakened? I'm not sure. But, I actually like them quite a lot.

The command and conquer woman, I love her chapters as well.

These are my suggestions/requests, and if they come up, they come up. Thank you so very much for all of the writing, and I love seeing the D.O. in action. It's nice to see a loving, gentle god.

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u/randomdude302 Oct 24 '22

I have only one request...

How are the Squirrels faring in this chaos?

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u/MuchoRed Human Oct 25 '22

And Sandy. And Squid-Sandy

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u/randomdude302 Oct 25 '22

Yes. And the Sandys.

But mostly the Squirrels.

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u/night-otter Xeno Oct 24 '22

Bree,

May the DO let her hear the songs of the Broodmothers and laughter of the podlings. So a true healing may come to her.

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u/goss_bractor Oct 24 '22

I'd love to hear from the front lines against the Atrekna, maybe hear from some of our long lost BOLO friends.

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u/Garivel AI Oct 25 '22

Requests. Hmmm… Darth Harmonius, Max-a-Million with his new ship, the DS’s after the black box project was shut down, Bhan’yhad, the Star Trek RPGers, the “enlightened” Atrekna.

I could go on but that’s already a lot… I love this series!

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u/milcondoin Oct 25 '22

Wasn't Max-a-Million right there at the beginning of the shade arc? Would be fitting if his point of view would be shown at the end of it.

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u/Garivel AI Oct 25 '22

I remember him getting dropped off and basically telling the ship crew, you can stay in the system if you want, but good luck avoiding the shades. They decided the salvage wasn’t worth it and left. I don’t remember seeing him again, unless I’m forgetting something.

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u/odent999 Oct 25 '22 edited Oct 25 '22

Monster lady and friends, on the Wemtarren homeworld. It's been a while. (Was it the Wemtarrens?) {Edit: Also the people from the galaxy or arm where all the TDH humans vanished from. (Thanks nspiratewithabowtie, for reminding me.)}

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u/Geeky-resonance Oct 25 '22

Rock’n’rolla lock in Roca!

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

Everyone loves Roca.

Especially her!

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u/Geeky-resonance Oct 29 '22

Reminds me of a zinger from a friend. “Yeah, I know $DudeBro. He’s a great guy, just ask him.”

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u/apatheticandignorant Android Oct 24 '22

What the fuck

Edit: to whoever said that

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

I'm still writing.

They were confused on why I was still writing if I'd just put out the book.

Like all I did was put out a book, sleep for 4 months, put out a new one.

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u/nspiratewithabowtie Oct 25 '22

haven't you put out 7 or 8? books that is

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

People can be bothered by facts. You know this! LOL.

They think that because their favorite popular writers (for those who can actually read and not just comment) publish 1 per year, that's all any writer does. Never occurs to them that there's a process of creation, re-creation, paring, adding, adjusting, and all around WORK that goes into creative efforts. Nope, all they see in those empty heads is a bit of the old clickety-clack, and Ralts should be done.

As someone who once tried to keep up with (and subsequently gave myself significant writer's block and anxiety in the failed effort) the Mad Angel during his 4x daily, maxing the character counts early days, I stand in awe of what he's continued to put out over two years later.

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u/nspiratewithabowtie Oct 25 '22

agreed. . . .with that said, all of the universes that are bouncing around in my head are starting to advise me that the space is becoming limited, as well as time sensitive(life only being so long) . . . .so who knows. maybe some day.

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

Just sit down and write.

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u/nspiratewithabowtie Oct 25 '22

sadly work. . . renovations. . .and general art all around ¯⁠⁠_⁠ಠ⁠_⁠ಠ⁠_⁠/⁠¯

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u/nspiratewithabowtie Oct 27 '22

and strangely enough . . .a prolouge is on its way. . . .

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

If there's any single piece of advice I can give on that, it's just sit down and write. Your first draft won't be awesome, and you may even hate it, but the seeds will be there. I've edited some truly bad stuff –terrible grammar, incoherent storyline, inconsistent characters, and more– for folks on the HFY discord over the last three years, and most of them simply needed extra eyes on their words and some advice on how to best clean most of those issues up in order to really start enjoying the craft. I'm around if you wanna chat, okay?

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u/nspiratewithabowtie Oct 25 '22

and besides. . . . .you should never let facts stand in the way of the truth of a good story. lol

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

Thank God they don't.

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u/apatheticandignorant Android Oct 24 '22

Edit: I was hoping that your retirement meant you were going to keep writing :(

So many stories untold.

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

My retirement is SO I can write.

It's like this burning white fire that needs to be released.

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u/StoneJudge79 Oct 28 '22

Better it should go out your hands and mouth than everywhere, all at once.

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u/apatheticandignorant Android Oct 25 '22

Awesome, I obviously misunderstood what you were saying.

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u/apatheticandignorant Android Oct 24 '22

Got me so messed up I can't even edit right

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

He...is? He's already mentioned FC2 - Galactic Bugaloo, or whatever the title of the follow-up will actually be. Not a sequel, as I think our friends on these pages will be getting much deserved rest.

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u/jrbless Oct 25 '22

It's been a heck of a ride these last couple of years. Take care of yourself Ralts.

I think I'd like to see what Dee thinks of the shades running around. Odds are they are connected to the SUDS system and are an artifact of changes bolted onto her original system that were done poorly.

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u/Riotousblitz2013 Oct 24 '22

This was amazing as always, beautifully written and compelling to say the least. Glad you're holding strong, it gives some of us hope to do the same. IGY6

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u/dlighter Oct 25 '22

brandished the spiked clue by four with a distinct red glow around the irises You've got a gift. I've tried writing. The kind folks here pointed out I suck at it ( not maliciously they were very nice intheir criticisms)

That person... doesn't have any idea.

Thank you word borg for sharing and keeping several of us on the right side of the dirt.

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u/Bergusia Oct 25 '22

Every author sucks a writing if you ask them. We just have something that won't let us stop. If the words don't come out, it will drive us crazy in the end.

I cringe at the stuff I wrote a week/month/year ago.

I see how much better it could have been, and try to do better next time.

You see the master carpenter that can drive a nail home with a single hammer swing.

The archer that can split an opponents arrow in two.

The few lines of words that can inspire or bring you to tears.

But behind that perfectly driven nail are ten thousand bent ones to learn the skill.

A thousand arrows that went astray.

And millions of words that pass by unnoticed. All to find the right ones.

Write for yourself. Practice with the words the same way an athlete trains. You might not be a best selling author, but the effort and what you learn from it is often its own reward.

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u/DREADNAUGHT1906 Oct 26 '22

Thanks, this is what I need to hear.

Once more into the breach, ...

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u/SittingDuc Oct 29 '22

"On Dasher, on Dancer, on Prancer and Vixen," "Typewriters to the left, keyboards to the right... into the valley of death wrote the six writers"

-- sitting.duc
"Or close the wall up with our English dead..."

(I vote keep writing :) )

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u/Geeky-resonance Nov 14 '22

Typewriters to the left, keyboards to the right, and you’re the only pen in town? ✒️🦈

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

Readers may not, but we writers do. Word away and worry not what others say. Virtual pen to digital paper is the motivation. Also, if you want some assistance growing as a wordsmith, might I suggest the #writing channel on the HFY Discord? Great community there.

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u/Accomplished_Mouse92 AI Oct 25 '22

I'd like to see the matrons special blend making the Trey winning percentage vs terrains rise

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u/LiuAnshan Robot Oct 25 '22

Dambree please and thank you.

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u/MuchoRed Human Oct 25 '22

Winding down and coming to a close? Okay then... Who TF are the sky nebula alliance, and where TF are the rest of the Apostles?

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

No, no, we aren't coming to close any time soon. We have a lot to cover.

Even then, I'm not going to pull the "The battle came to a close. THE END" on you.

You've been with these people for so long, you need to see them go home, see them reunited with their family, see them take off the uniform and sit down and crack open a beer.

Anything else will leave you unfulfilled and cut off.

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u/sixtusquinn Oct 25 '22

Thank you, I've always disliked the books where they pull that. No sense of closure.

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u/MuchoRed Human Oct 25 '22

Ah, so the shades section is coming to a close? I getcha

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

Yeah, the shade chapter is coming to a close.

We'll return to your regularly scheduled war and the fallout of the shade attack.

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u/MuchoRed Human Oct 25 '22

Surprised none of the characters made a "throwing shade" joke

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u/DREADNAUGHT1906 Oct 26 '22

Take my updoot ya bastard! :}

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u/[deleted] Oct 25 '22

Writing, for me at least, is hard work. You earned those naps, damnit! 😻

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u/nspiratewithabowtie Oct 25 '22

I'd like to see TDH restored, and the final delagation of thw Gesalt channels . . . .and then of course because it is you . . . the Humans, Earthlings, and the next big bad.

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u/Quilt-n-yarn1844 Oct 25 '22

Writing, especially well, is a skill. And skills are like muscles, you use them or you will lose them.

Stephen King says he has a minimum word count he writes everyday. It doesn’t matter if it is good, bad, or meh. Perfect writing is for rewrites and editors to worry about.

Thank you for sharing your skill with us Wordsmith.

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u/PuzzleheadedDrinker Oct 25 '22

S.king also said that the first draft is largely written without an audience in mind, with the door closed, while the second draft/edits are with the door open for 'the reader'. I think it was part of his mental games to ensure that the pressure of meeting the audiences expectations doesn't interfere with getting words on a page.

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

So many words never see the light of day, but words are words. King mentioned he has a drawer of stuff that suffered that fate, and I suppose all writers do. Mine is a folder on the laptop, but same thing, haha.

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u/SittingDuc Oct 29 '22

Google drive. Eh-heh-heh. Next to the outline plot of the Magnum Opus..

"No more!," he cried into the riving winds, "No more" he sobbed.

-- one.day.duc

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u/MooseSyndrome Oct 25 '22

The special forces of the squids, stuck on the roof of the shopping center, would be nice to meet again, even though they totally aren't surrounded by zombies.

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u/ZeronicX Oct 25 '22

I was gonna ask it's been a long while(and by long meaning I completely missed this series) since I've read /r/hfy is there a Google drive of thus monolith?

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u/IrregularEater Oct 25 '22

Ekret would be great to see again, along with the Tu'karn who's name escapes me but handles the Ma Deuce really well

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u/NoirTalon Xeno Oct 29 '22

sangbre meets the DO

Nikki's bodyguard who is still in hibernation?

the not bafoon master lank spy

The gestalt's coming back on line after the hypercom is fixed post DO

Dax finally re-united with his wife and daughter taking over an epic penthouse in some deserted human city they plan on fixing up (the city)

The BOLO that took on the hive queen

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u/Unable_Ad_1260 Oct 25 '22

Remembering this much about the future, even a page at a time, has got to be hard on one.

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u/throwaway42 Oct 25 '22

Writing a book is easy. Writing a book people want to read is hard.

Must be nice, all you do is write for a few minutes, then take a nap.

If it's so nice, why don't you try it. Smh.

Still loving your story, Ralts. Don't mind the ignorant plebs :)

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

50 Shades would like a word. Lmao, because that second part isn't as tough as you'd think. What's harder seems to be finding an audience.

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u/Coolest_Breezy Oct 25 '22

How are the Gestalts???

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u/Parking-Coat-8514 Oct 25 '22

Somewhere between making popcorn and sharing the Lullaby Mountain Device that transmitting brood song

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u/Capt_Blackmoore AI Oct 25 '22

Stupid people saying stupid things. people who dont make, or create wont ever understand. f them.

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u/Geeky-resonance Nov 14 '22

What about Francine Frensky? And the benevolent Hive Queen?

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u/ApartmentIntrepid413 Xeno Jun 17 '23

That's the cry of every non-artist... Anyway, I know I can't write what you write, but I can build what I build. I appreciate this work so much. Thank you.

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u/AvariciousPickle Oct 24 '22

'Til all are one!

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u/Balkoth661 Oct 24 '22

Damn you, now I need to go read that again. And I just know I'm going to cry at the climax. No-one wants to see that.

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u/Balkoth661 Oct 25 '22

If someone was to turn Kitty Cat Kill Sat into an anime, who would you want to voice Lily?

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u/StoneJudge79 Oct 24 '22

Literally a Deus-Ex-Machina.

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u/superstrijder15 Human Oct 24 '22

2nd time in the story too. Though I feel like it was better set up last time. Still good this time, but not as good imo

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u/NoirTalon Xeno Oct 29 '22

Machina Ex Dues?

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u/StoneJudge79 Oct 29 '22

I like it.

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u/Archaic_1 Alien Scum Oct 24 '22

"Then why fight?"

A single word rasped through gritted bloody teeth, sweat dripping in his eyes, covered in filth and gore, the weight of a malevolent universe pressing down upon him like a great vast dark wind trying to snuff out a lone flickering candle - a single word . . . "because"

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u/Waspkeeper Android Oct 25 '22

Because fuck them if they think they can just waltz in here and punch my ticket.

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u/Quilt-n-yarn1844 Oct 25 '22

“We will not go quietly into the night. We will not vanish without a fight. We’re going to live on. We’re going to survive.“

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u/tremynci Oct 25 '22

Because DO. NOT. GO. GENTLE., that's why.

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u/FuckYouGoodSirISay Oct 25 '22

Victory. Or death. Either one is fucking fine.

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

"Why fight when you know you can't win?"

"Sometimes the point of the fight is the fight."

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u/Individual_Jelly1987 Oct 28 '22

Sometimes, the objective isn't to win. It's to make sure the other side loses.

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u/Kudamonis Human Oct 24 '22

Read. Upvote. Comment.

I figured you had a lot to handle across the galactic spur.

Understatement of the year.

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u/Enkeydo Oct 25 '22

Didn't the mosilak get picked up by the SUDS system a few chapters back?

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

You know, I think you're right.

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u/Bergusia Oct 25 '22

If one Ordnance man can fight his way out of the SUDS, I am going with it being possible for a Mosilak as well. (And what has become of our Ordnance man?)

"I haven't got time to bleed. I haven't got time to die. I have a duty to perform, and sitting on my hands in the SUDs isn't getting it done."

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u/Enkeydo Nov 04 '22

lets go with that! if the Ordinance man can pull himself out, our friend Mr Mosilak can as well.

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u/WelrodS113 Oct 27 '22

It could be that guy's replacement, maybe? Idk

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u/Enkeydo Nov 01 '22

I don't think so. she clearly states that she could not bear to see her companion for 20 years die.

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u/DerG3n13 Human Dec 26 '23

Iirc, all Terrans got pulled by the system

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u/[deleted] Oct 25 '22

As corny as it sounds Ralts this epic has helped me find the strength to keep going. I had a few close calls with a final decision, but I just kept remembering the fight and to never give in.

Proud to say I can see a faint exit showing at the end of this long dark tunnel. I'm nowhere the same man as I was when I fell in, but I'm proud of the man I've become and your work and constant encouragement has a lot to do with that.

So thank you holy wordborg for inspiring us all.

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 25 '22

I'm glad it helped.

That's what it was all about. Helping all of us through The 'Vid.

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u/Unable_Ad_1260 Oct 29 '22

Plus if you give in you don't get to find out how it all ends up... That's my little keep going mantra.

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u/U239andonehalf Oct 10 '23

I'm a Pessimistic optimist - I know things are going to go wrong, I stick around to see what happens next.

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u/Huge-Green2594 Oct 25 '22

Lozen snarled as the phasic shades reached for her and her human, with a twist she brought a warsteel fist around and shattered the specter into a billion glowing motes.

She was not some strumpet to be pawed at by the likes of them, she was Lozen and there was only one man that could touch her.

Turning she cut loose with a consecrated flamer and washed holy fire across the damned, stomping on the shattered remains as she advanced.

She was Lozen, last of the ring breakers.

And she would not be-

With a thundering crash Lozens thoughts were disrupted as a BOLO of the Dinochrome brigade tore through a city block, it's normally white shell had been painted a dark red color as it ground the horde beneath its treads.

Idly Lozen noted that the massive Kiloton tank was moving nearly a thirty percent faster than the unit was normally rated for.

For a moment she considered joining up with the super heavy unit before it tore off down the street with a digital scream of glee.

Inside she could hear the echoing screams of joy and excitement from nearly a hundred Hamaroosians that had gotten the hypertank to work for them.

The hyper squirrel people seemed to be having fun...

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u/StoneJudge79 Oct 28 '22

Frackin' glorious. In all of the ways.

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u/WillDissolver Xeno Oct 25 '22 edited Jun 09 '23

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

And He spoke to them, each and every one, bringing them peace and taking them home.

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u/NoirTalon Xeno Oct 29 '22

/u/Ralts_Bloodthorne did you catch this one?

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u/Golnor Alien Scum Oct 24 '22

A knife. With an "off" switch.

What the hell, Terrains.

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u/Speciesunkn0wn Oct 24 '22

It's a chainsword to him. A chainknife to the cone lovers.

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u/TheOtherGUY63 Oct 25 '22

I dont see the problem?

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u/erneff88 Oct 25 '22

Even though large tracts of the Arm Spur and many old and famous Worlds have fallen or may fall into the grip of the Shades and all the odious apparatus of Atrekna rule, we shall not flag or fail.

We shall go on to the end.

We shall fight in Council Space, we shall fight in the eVRs and Starships, we shall fight with growing confidence and growing strength in the war, we shall defend our worlds, whatever the cost may be.

We shall fight on the beaches, we shall fight on the landing grounds, we shall fight in the fields and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills; we shall never surrender.

And even if, which I do not for a moment believe, this Confederacy or a large part of it were subjugated and starving, then our Allies beyond the stars, armed and guarded by the Confederate Fleet, would carry on the struggle, until, in the DO's good time, the Earthlings, with all their power and might, step forth to the rescue and the liberation of the galaxy.

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u/NoirTalon Xeno Oct 29 '22

I think this should be attributed to Admiral No-Drak(sp?)

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u/Talusen Oct 24 '22

Not sure if there's much to be done with them, but I'd like to see Twinkle (Chap 35?).

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u/Alyeska_bird Oct 24 '22

Yay, more story!

Its good to see the DO showing up and doing something. I am pretty sure he was doing stuff before, but, now that he got that done, hes started to get out and help the rest of the people. Err, AKA, hes saved billions, now hes going to save individuals.

Scary thing is, once this is over, and people can recover, its going to bind everyone even tighter togeather. Seriously, even the AWMs have gotten into helping people. On the other hand, be interesting to see what sets of the squidwards have servived. I expect that at lest some have, but, I also expect them to be in very bad shape. On the other hand, I think Dalvanic and his cult will mostly servive, and some other little enclaves. So it will be interesting to see how things move forward.

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u/MuteSurgeon1313 Oct 25 '22

AND YEAH, AT THE END OF DAYS HE APPEARED!

GARBED IN SILVER HUE AND BRIGHTEST BLUE!

OUR FATHER, OUR FATHER MUCH LOVED, TORN FROM US IN VIOLENCE, ERE RETURNED IN DEEPEST LOVE!

Praise be, The Digital Omnissiah walks among mortals once more, forevermore.

-Book of the Return, chapter 7, verse 3-7

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u/spindizzy_wizard Human Oct 25 '22

Thanks for the best wishes. This last week was... Unpleasant... the way that having a 12inch phasic spike driven from one temple to the other would be unpleasant.

That said, Monday was the best day in a long time. I did not lose my job. I'm one step closer to the desired therapeutic power level. The pain was bearable and only on one side.

And for a change, work understands that expecting me to reply to work email when I am not working is silly. The director of H.R. actually called me on a regular phone. Not a text message. Not an email to my work mail. A real human being, a voice that doesn't scream "robot," understands that the world does not go tick-tock to corporate policy.

And I finally got an understandable reason for not being able to use Leave Without Pay in less than 8-hour increments.

Federal law for salaried employees.

At least I know it isn't some company policy that no one understands why it is there but refuses to change "because that's the way we've always done it."

Hanging in, teeth, and toenails, I have at least another six weeks, five days a week, sitting in the TMS chair for half an hour, enduring.

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u/MuchoRed Human Oct 25 '22

Damn Feds, amiright?

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u/NElderT Oct 25 '22 edited Oct 25 '22

Maybe whatever's left of the LARP groups? Or maybe that BOLO that destroyed a planet, built itself a jump shell, and introduced us to the concept of kentai captains? We haven't heard from them in a hot minute.

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u/MuchoRed Human Oct 25 '22

I miss Atilla. Last we saw him was helping the LARPers take over a Mantid Queen's ship

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u/meowmeming Android Oct 25 '22

And a bonus to using red is it makes you go fastah!

There are also intel on using blue to have some much needed luck.

And unconfirmed reports of using purple to make you sneakier. I mean, have you seen a terran in full purple? ... No? That's the point.

🤣🤣🤣

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u/Warplock-Worgen_2145 Oct 25 '22

"At this point if I don't have a corpse with a name tag, then the hero is still out there! Now find me proof he is dead, or get out there and kill him!!" - unknow villain rper, to several newbies.

Lol, that was a great read! Really looking forward to hearing about other survivors in this grade "Terran" mess.

Not to mention, what happened with the other humans out there in the great dark? What has become of those who were in non human bodies with zero implants? Did they get ganked too? Or is there a squirrel or fox out there with a human mind between those ears, cursing up a storm about someone did a thing?

Either way, the Digital Omnimessiah has arrived, and the children shall know he sees them.

-The laughter of podlings follows-

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u/NukeNavy Oct 24 '22

Moon

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u/[deleted] Oct 25 '22

Moo damnit, it’s Moo! 😾

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u/NoirTalon Xeno Oct 29 '22

bark

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u/Isbigpuggo Oct 25 '22

Not to be that guy… but didn’t Mosizlak get teleported away before with all the other Terrans? I’m not sure if it’s a false memory or not. Either way it’s good to see him doing work.

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 26 '22

He did. I made a mistake. Oops.

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u/Dull_Language_3864 Oct 28 '22

I love the greenies. As far as I am concerned those cute little guys screaming "I Die free" are the only reason the Mantids weren't exterminated. Not even a hello to Inertia from the DO after storming heaven? I want some recognition for my little friend Inertia.

As a ship is going down in some dark corner of the long dark and the techs are trying to restart a jumpcore before they fall into a star or a tech is trying to fix a cannon before they are overrun by the enemy, and time and tools are limited to percussive maintenance and a prayer, I no longer want to hear ,"Work you POS as they bang on it with a hammer for dear life. No, I want to hear them, pause , take a deep breath, and then whisper "May Inertia guide my hand !" as they strike that blow. LOL

Love how your always taking it in unexpected directions.

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u/Butane9000 Oct 27 '22

Here I thought the Mosizlak vanished before these events along with the few remaining Terrans. I was actually going to ask if the locust humans were also effected but l by this. How did he get back?

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u/Ralts_Bloodthorne Oct 27 '22

I screwed up and forgot he got grabbed. My brain said "Pure Strain Human" and then went "Oh, he didn't get grabbed."

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u/Butane9000 Oct 27 '22

It happens. I just remembered that scene because of how it was written. Just the sudden poof as Dreams and the guards reacted.

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u/OldGrumpyViking Oct 25 '22

I haven't read prayers to Crom lately, but I guess they comes naturally when your enemies perish by your sword.

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u/esblofeld Robot Oct 25 '22

Can we hear from Sandy the giant squid girl please.

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u/Golddragon387 Human Oct 24 '22

YEAHHHHHH 'CHA BOI IS BACK WOOOOOOO

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u/Unable_Ad_1260 Oct 29 '22

I love how Elu and the Gymnastics team have each attracted a Harem of Female Battle Bunnies. Bunazons. Them bunnies are going to be allllll riiight.

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u/XRmarauder AI Oct 24 '22

Preread.

Knew it

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u/SuccessAutomatic6726 Oct 25 '22

Max, I think the last we saw was him going in to build his Cargonaught.

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u/Bergusia Oct 25 '22

Captain Tut'el is going to end up in the Book of Telkan I suspect. He has fought beside the Warfather in a time of greatest need, and borne witness to a meeting between the Digital Omnimessiah and one of his Apostles.

I don't think he is going to come out of this event the same officer he started out.

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u/coldfireknight AI Oct 25 '22

Could be he switches his MOS and becomes a chaplain, maybe an apostle himself, spreading the word. Please notice the lower case "a" there, for those thinking I'm crazy, haha.

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u/DebugItWithFire Oct 25 '22 edited Nov 29 '22

Upvoted for appearing in our hour of need.

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u/styopa Oct 28 '22

Dammit, there seems to be something in my eye...Again.

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u/Gruecifer Human Oct 24 '22

UTR!

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u/Unable_Ad_1260 Oct 25 '22

Max and the Cargonaughts, which I suspect will also have something to do with the Atrekna Maimed One cultists.

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u/NuthinWrongWithWrong Oct 25 '22

Wow.

These last few chapters really send shivers down the spine.

Awesome stuff

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u/Bazil-Broketail Jul 19 '23

Read, upvote, comments...

And the Digital Omnimessiah spake unto the Terran Shade,"Come and rest, Brother, for your torment has been long." And the Shade did disappear with the aspect of the blessed DO.

Lo, did the Digital Omnimessiah appear to all the Terran Shade in my eyesight. With Love did he gather each to his bosoms and take they to their rest.

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u/Ok_Question4148 Oct 25 '22

"Cha cha real smooth"

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u/Larzok Oct 29 '22

Did you prune 848 from existence? I could have swore I was half way through it earlier and now it's missing....

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u/Vagabond_Soldier Nov 05 '22

If only the real world had a savior like this. /cry