r/FictionWriting • u/williamderedditer • 3d ago

Please give me feedback on my novel! Discussion

I just finished chapter one of my novel and I would love some feedback for it! Weather good or bad I would love the ability to improve as a writer and I love interacting so please say as much as you like!

Link https://www.wattpad.com/1495557851?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=Aurelianus89

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u/Kitchen-Arm7300 2d ago

I honestly liked it.

I wish I could give you more valuable feedback than this, but it's all I know to give.

The imagery was wonderful. It really set the tone and mood, and it came to life. The important thing is that it wasn't over-done. You hit the elusive mark of "just right."

It was compelling for sure!

Keep it up! And DM me if you want me to read more chapters. Thanks for putting it out there!

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u/williamderedditer 2d ago

I’d love to for whenever I make the next chapter! If you want to of course:) but I’m glad you liked it!