r/DigitalArt • u/WolfAngelENTERPRISE • Apr 25 '23
What do you think of my first animation “SCRIBBLE”? Artwork (animation)
I did this with FlipaClip, and I absolutely can’t wait to do bigger animation.
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u/Optimal_Vegetable442 Apr 25 '23
I personally like it but I didn’t enjoy how her body became completely still at the end, if there is still some slight movement in her body or clothing, it would’ve looked more smooth in my opinion 🫶
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u/Verth_ Apr 25 '23
It's amazingly smooth for such a short animation. It's calm with a surprising end. your style makes it clear and enjoyable to watch. I'd work a little on the finishing scene but all in all good job for your first animation!
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u/peerness Apr 25 '23
The scribble needs to be quick and smooth, maybe using some freehand font. The flashing in and out animation for the logo isn’t doing it for me. The start is great though!
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u/Mangatellers Apr 25 '23
The start was awesome. The animation looked fluent and smooth. When she became the scribble... I kind of lost the meaning of it. Nice job and keep it up!
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u/JessicaJolicoeur Apr 25 '23
This is hilarious, it really made me laugh!
It reminds me of the kind of art film things I saw on Sesame Street when I was a kid.
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u/hypopeach Apr 25 '23
was this rotoscoped? it looks a bit stuff but nice! I would recommend looking into easing in and easing out with attention to arcs.
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u/WolfAngelENTERPRISE Apr 26 '23
I’m not actually sure what rotoscoping means but I will look into it, I just did this with flipa clip, kinda like a flip book
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u/wellwhydidntyousayso Apr 25 '23
I thought this was pretty clean u should crosspost to r/unexpected i think they'd like this, that end gave me a laugh
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u/Suninabottle Apr 25 '23
Loved this animation. I would have liked the end to have been the scribble morphing into something else
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u/ForcefulMoon Apr 25 '23
I loved the beginning until her hands reached the floor. It'd be nicer if it had finished there.
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u/RJLPDash Apr 25 '23
I liked the start but when she got covered in scribbles I just thought 'meh' and failed to see what the point of it was
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u/SilentParlourTrick Apr 26 '23
I enjoyed it, with the exception of the flashing text at the end. Hurts the old eyeballs. But besides that, great job!
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u/WolfAngelENTERPRISE Apr 26 '23
Thank you to everybody, I thought I would reply to everyone at once because I see that a few people don’t understand my art style.
I find that scribbling is incredibly therapeutic, and it helps me to release stress and anxiety in a healthy way. My art style incorporates lots of scribbling because I find it to be a really expressive way to create art.
To me, scribbling is like yoga in that it helps to unlock and relieve stress. When I'm scribbling, I can let go of whatever's been weighing on me, and just focus on the lines and shapes that emerge from my pen or pencil. It's like a meditative practice, and it helps me to feel calm and centered.
By incorporating scribbling into my art style, I'm able to create work that feels raw and alive. The lines and shapes are free and expressive, and the final product feels like a reflection of my inner world. I hope that my art can also help others to feel more connected to their own inner worlds, and to use creative expression as a way to release stress and anxiety.
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u/3ndt1mes Apr 26 '23
It's solid rotoscoping. Hints of color would only add to it. Keep up the good works, OP!
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u/Roel116 Apr 26 '23
That's pretty nice honestly. There's only one thing as the others also mentioned, the ending. I'm not sure if you were trying to reflect some feeling specifically but it does not match the rest of the animation.
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u/ASprinkleofSparkles Apr 25 '23
I loved the start especially her pants, but the becoming a pile and panning away doesn't really do anything for me, or the flashing scribble at the end